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Hi Cooper I really liked your full stops and capital letters. Next time you could not use as much capital letters for Payton.
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Hi Cooper I like how you use some funny facts that happen was on camp.
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from Antonia
Hi Cooper I really liked your full stops and capital letters. Next time you could not use as much capital letters for Payton.
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