Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Paroa School in Greymouth, NZ.
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Hi cooper.nice job. you spoke clearly and said the team and said who you where describing about.Next step you could do a capital letter for I
Hi Cooper I like the way you used a lot of expression in reading for a next step could you use a capital i.
Hi Cooper,I like the way how you have the fact in. maybe you could speak more clearly? or look at the camera? from Qaiden
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
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ReplyDeleteHi cooper.nice job. you spoke clearly and said the team and said who you where describing about.
ReplyDeleteNext step you could do a capital letter for I
Hi Cooper I like the way you used a lot of expression in reading for a next step could you use a capital i.
ReplyDeleteHi Cooper,
ReplyDeleteI like the way how you have the fact in. maybe you could speak more clearly? or look at the camera?
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