Wednesday 7 September 2016

My football Moment in time

walt: make a video to help each other.
I enjoyed making a moment in time about me being a soccer player I hope people will learn off my ideas
to be btb i  could talk a little slower
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  1. Anonymous8 September 2016 at 12:07

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  2. Jayden8 September 2016 at 12:11

    Hi cooper.nice job. you spoke clearly and said the team and said who you where describing about.
    Next step you could do a capital letter for I

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  3. Carter19 September 2016 at 12:12

    Hi Cooper I like the way you used a lot of expression in reading for a next step could you use a capital i.

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  4. Qaiden12 October 2016 at 14:09

    Hi Cooper,
    I like the way how you have the fact in. maybe you could speak more clearly? or look at the camera?

    from Qaiden

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